Monday, 23 June 2014

What's your sign?- It's Euphoric

What's your Sign? 


Shuddering hands, blood red eyes, insatiable desire- a bottomless pit.
He looked around, his eyes landing on her.
A different wave this time- wild, hypnotic and jittery.  
420 piff, with me?
It was more than a choice of only the inner-city hipsters. 





Ps- For those having a little difficulty in understanding 420, here's a wiki link. You're Welcome :)

Disclaimer- The writer in no way promotes the consumption of cannabis. This article is purely fictional.

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33 comments:

  1. I really like the phrase "bottomless pit", it told me a lot about the desire.

    Nice work!

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  2. Very thought-provoking. Good job!

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  3. I like how you captured the other world feeling you get and how it affects others differently.

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  4. I was in Brooklyn in February and march for work. You captured half the borough, perfectly.

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    1. I guess then it's the same everywhere in the world! It truly has become more than a choice of the inner city hipsters.

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  5. ooh..I liked the way the first line describes the feeling..shuddering, insatiable..nicely done as usual, Soumyaa! :-)

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  6. Stark and honest, Soumyaa. Loved this take! How addictive it can be and how well you've said it in 42 words.

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    1. Wow, I love your comments always! Thank you

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  7. this brings back many memories! "bottomless pit" reminds me of the "munchies." really wonderful work :)

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    1. Munchies, haha. Thank you for being here Malaika :)

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  8. I live in Brooklyn and this is definitely fantastically accurate. I can't even pinpoint when that even came about. Great piece!

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    1. I live in India and it's almost coming about here as well. Brooklyn is spreading the fever it seems ;)
      Thank you so much April !

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  9. I love the emotional transition you created. "a different wave this time. nice!

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    1. Oops. Forgot the other "" you know what i mean. ;)

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    2. Haha that's ok. And that you for that comment! :D

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  10. You unwittingly channeled my downstairs neighbors perfectly, Soumyaa!

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    1. Did I just do that? Tell them on my behalf that they're heading towards a bottomless pit, will you please? ;)

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  11. I like how you took us through the different moments and aspects of this vignette.

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  12. "Wild, hypnotic, jittery" -- can't think of better words to use. Great job.

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    1. Thank you! That is some flattering comment

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  13. Aww your post is superb. Very different from the run of the mill type.

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    1. Thank you Usha ji. Glad you feel that way :)

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  14. A different take, Soumyaa. Great :)

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  15. Bang on! It's crazy, wacky and superb. An ode to hipsters and the green chanel:)

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